题目内容
As we all know,health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study good and enjoy life. Therefore,many teenagers don't pay any attentions to their health,especially during the holidays. They spend too much times watching TV,playing computer games and chat on the Internet all night,that is bad for their health. Firstly,this may make them to near?sighted. Besides,their bodies become more weaker. Thirdly,they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out,which may have a bad effect to their mental health.
In my opinion,they should spend less time in the front of the TV or the computer,go out to take some exercise,play some sports,visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.
As we all know,health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study good (改为well) and enjoy life. Therefore (改为however) ,many teenagers don't pay any attentions to their health,especially during the holidays. They spend too much times (去掉s) watching TV,playing computer games and chat (后加ing) on the Internet all night,that (改为which) is bad for their health. Firstly,this may make them to (去掉to) near?sighted. Besides,their bodies become more (改为much) weaker. Thirdly,they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out,which may have a bad effect to their mental health.
In my opinion,they should spend less time in the (去掉the) front of the TV or the computer,go out to take some exercise,play some sports,visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.