Question

11．慈善捐助正在我国流行开来．请用英语写一篇150词左右的文章，就慈善捐助谈谈你的想法，内容要点如下：
1．慈善捐助对受惠人群会有哪些影响；
2．你最想加入的慈善组织是哪一类（助学、济贫、关爱残疾人…），理由是什么．
注意：
1．可参照以上内容适当发挥；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Charity is becoming a popular word in China．Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system．
Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．（高分句型二）In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（高分句型三）
Given a chance for charity，I would like to work for the children in the remote areas．Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（高分句型四）Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs，helping their life to get back on track．（150 words）．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息慈善捐助正在我国流行开来．请用英语写一篇150词左右的文章，就慈善捐助谈谈你的想法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：慈善捐助对受惠人群会有哪些影响；你最想加入的慈善组织是哪一类（助学、济贫、关爱残疾人…），理由是什么．  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：involved in 涉及，参与；Meanwhile同时；In addition另外； take responsibility for为…负责；drop out of辍学；get back回来；
Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．（高分句型一）
Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．（高分句型二）
In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（高分句型三）
Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（高分句型四）

解答 Charity is becoming a popular word in China．
      Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system．
      Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．（高分句型二）In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（高分句型三）
      Given a chance for charity，I would like to work for the children in the remote areas．Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（高分句型四）Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs，helping their life to get back on track．（150 words）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．