Question

【题目】“美丽中国”是我国生态文明建设的宏伟目标。然而生活中一些不文明的现象时有发生，假如你是高三学生李华，请你围绕“美丽中国，美在行动”这一主题，用英语给全国的中学生写一封词数100左右的倡议书。

注意：

1. 倡议书的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 倡议书中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。

A Letter to High School Students

Dear friends,

As we know, “ Beautiful China” is the goal of our Chinese Dream.

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

A Letter to High School Students

Dear friends,

As we know, “Beautiful China” is the goal of our Chinese Dream.

Do you want to live in a beautiful world? So it is our obligation to maintain the ecological balance. To fulfill this task, we should bear the following ecological codes in mind. First, we should stick to the habit of walking to school. It’s also important to recycle everything recyclable and cherish our school’s environment by picking up any litter and turning off the taps and the lights. What’s more, we can also persuade our friends and family members to form environmental life style and good habits.

Let’s all take action now and contribute to the goal to make our country more and more beautiful.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信写作。主要表达呼吁全体中学生杜绝不雅行为，致力于建设美丽中国，可以提出一些切实可行的建议，题目已经给定大致内容，写作时要注意适当增加内容，以保证文章的连贯性。注意文中所给的信息，不可遗漏，可以多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。书信的格式一定要正确。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】第二段开头Do you want to live in a beautiful world? 用了一个反问句，设计巧妙。第二句用了句型it is our obligation to do “做……是我们的义务”。下面对学生的行为提出了几点建议，分别用到first,what’s more, 等逻辑词，层次分明，逻辑紧密。整篇文章语言言简意赅，感情真挚，所有要点都没有遗漏。文章连贯通顺。