题目内容
18.假定你是李华.你的美国笔友杰克最近情绪比较低落,请你根据所给提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件.内容主要包括:1.表示安慰;2.你的建议;3.愿意提供更多的帮助.
注意:1.字数100左右(头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you have been in low spirits recently.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给最近情绪比较低落的美国笔友杰克写一封电子邮件,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:表示安慰;你的建议;愿意提供更多的帮助.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为对情绪比较低落的杰克表示安慰.第二部分为作者的建议.
重点短语与句型:
in low spirits 情绪低落
care about 关心
turn to sb for help求助某人
高分句型一:Maybe you should go out to have fresh air,which is good for your body.此句用了which引导非限制性定语从句
高分句型二:Not only can you also listen to music but also you can watch TV and read books此句 not only置句首,后面部分倒装.
解答 Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you have been in low spirits recently. I know you are very sad,but it is also good for you.(对情绪比较低落的杰克表示安慰)
Everyone had has bad ill in the past,so you don't have to care about it.If you care about your study,don't worry about that,I can help you.Maybe you should go out to have fresh air,which is good for your body(高分句型一).Not only can you also listen to music but also you can watch TV and read books(高分句型二).I hope you will be better soon,sleep more and have medcince on time so that you will be better soon.Please be happy.If you have any more questions,you can turn to me for help.(作者的建议)
Yours,
Li Hua.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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