Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

注意

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the modernist city in the world. There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can’t learn it in school. I’d also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the twin towers destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.

Answer 1

1.are 改成 am

2.had改成have

3.go改成going

4.city改成cities

5.have改成are

6.去掉it

7.towers∧destroyed中间加were

8.此处表示转折“否则”，“遗憾的是，这对塔被毁掉了，否则我就会有机会独自去看它们的”，故把and改成or。

9.excited改成exciting

10.unforgettable 是元音开头，所以把a改成an。

【解析】

1.1】根据主谓一致的原则，此处应该和I保持一致，故把are 改成 am。

2.2】根据句意此处应用现在完成进行时态“很长时间我一直期盼着去那里”，故把had改成have。

3.3】looking forward to 中的to 是介词，故把go改成going。

4.4】根据句意“它是世界上最现代化的城市之一”，所以此处的city应用复数形式，故把city改成cities。

5.5】此处是there be句型，“也有许多博物馆’”，故把have改成are。

6.6】something是先行词，后面是一个定语从句，it指代的就是something，在定语从句中是多余的，故去掉it。

7.7】这里是被动语态“这对塔被毁掉了”，主语是复数，所以在towers和destroyed中间加were。

8.8】 and改成or

9.9】这里表达的是“令人兴奋的旅行”，所以把excited改成exciting。

10.10】a改成an

考点：考查短文改错。