题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请阅读下面短文,并按要求以Our Life Rests on Our Choice为题,用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Life is a matter of choice. Seemingly, it means a choice of concrete (具体的) things. But in fact, it means choosing a way of life. Life is to be lived and enjoyed, not to be wasted or complained about.
Hardly can we forget the time when our society faced the threat from the life-and death disease --- SARS. Yet, even during those dreadful times, some suffering people remained optimistic. Instead of wearing white masks, some people turned to color1 ful ones, and thus displayed a happy mood. And some creative people dubbed SARS to mean “SMILE AND REMAIN SMILING.” People who survive these kinds of circumstances decide in their minds to carry on in spite of the hardships.
Although we cannot choose our appearance, inborn gifts and even avoid unexpected disasters and adversities (逆境), we do have the right to choose to live optimistically, to love our lives, to have dreams, and to cherish hopes.
Every morning when we get up, we have a choice of how we want to approach life that day.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文的概要;
2. 用约120个词就“Our Life Rests on Our Choice” 谈谈你的看法和感受,内容包括:
(1)简要叙述你对“Our Life Rests on Our Choice”的理解;
(2)请举例说明你会选择怎样的人生态度;
(3)简要叙述你这样选择的理由。(至少2点)
1.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接饮用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】
Our Life Rests on Our Choice
Faced with disasters and adversities, some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships. Life, to some extent, rests on our choice.
Life is full of ups and downs. When the time comes for us to make choices, we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude. A positive attitude somehow resembles the sail of a ship, which offers us the right direction.
As a teenager, it is of great significance to take a positive attitude towards life. To stay energetic, I will stick to an exercise schedule. I will also keep myself informed of the current events and communicate more with others, becoming socially connected.
All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man. Only by doing so can I fit in society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life.
【解析】
本作文是一篇总结材料并且结合题目所给要点的议论文,主要观点是人们的选择会影响人们的生活。题目中所给的材料文章主要讲述的是面对困难一些人选择积极乐观的态度,即使再艰辛也选择继续前行。文中首先根据题目要求对所给材料进行了简单的总结,然后提出了自己的观点,Life, to some extent, rests on our choice.表示生活在某种程度上取决于我们的选择。然后根据题目中所给体感信息结合自己的实例进行分点阐述。文章结构鲜明,简单明了,主要观点明确。
【亮点说明】
本文中出现了很多值得参考借鉴的好句子,比如:Life, to some extent, rests on our choice,采用插入语的形式,是简单的句子变得具有深意,增添了几分灵动性。When the time comes for us to make choices, we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude,时间状语从句的使用,是句子结构更加连贯性。还有很多较具有参考价值的句子。同时文中也运用了大量的好词汇好词组,比如:To stay energetic,is full of ups and downs,significance,等等的很多好词好句。是文章更加具有结构性,并且美化升级了文章内容。