题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的email了解到他最近因为一次考试没有考好而烦恼,请按照以下内容给Mike写一封回信。
1.宽慰他;
2.给予改进学习的建议(至少两点);
3.邀请周末去打篮球。
注意:
1.字数100字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入字数。
参考词汇:宽慰comfort
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam._________________________________________________
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Hoping everything will be fine with you.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.
To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.
How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun.
Hoping everything will be fine with you.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文根据提示可概括为三段式:第一段书信的简单寒暄问好,安慰他;第二段作为本文的主体,给予改进学习的建议(至少两点),
邀请周末去打篮球;最后,总结并希望他尽快好起来。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用:you are advised to do what I will tell you to.定语从句的使用:find out the real reasons why you failed the exam.倒装句的使用:Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.