题目内容
【题目】第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行。现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华,请根据自己的情况写一封申请信。内容包括:
1.热爱体育;2.英语流利;3.性格外向开朗;有组织能力
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. ___________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I am Li Hua, an 18–year-old boy who is build up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak English fluently, which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.
Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作,要点已给出;写作时可适当添加细节以使行文连贯,并注意使用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了同位语从句that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. 定语从句who is build up by doing sports regularly in my spare time.和which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble及which benefits me in communicating with strangers. 不定式表目的to apply to be one of the volunteers.并使用了so… that 句型,I would be grateful if...句型、not only…but also…句型。With a very good command of English, taken into account, Looking forward to等词汇及So,Besides, Meanwhile等连接词的使用让文章更流畅自如。