Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校外教Mr.Brown邀请你周日上午去听关于英国文学的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示，写封邮件向Mr.Brown说明情况。

1.表示歉意；

2.说明理由；

3.表示遗憾；

4.希望得到讲座的有关资料。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr.Brown,

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr.Brown,

I'm so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on the British literature this Sunday morning,because an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day.We haven't seen each other for quite a long time and I have promised to meet him at the railway station,for he is not familiar with this city.

As you know,I'm deeply interested in the British literature,so it's really a pity to miss the lecture.But I wonder if I could borrow the record or have a copy of the courseware.It would mean so much to me to watch the record or PPT and learn what's covered in your lecture.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件。你校外教Mr.Brown邀请你周日上午去听关于英国文学的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示，写封邮件向Mr.Brown说明情况。内容包括：表示歉意；说明理由；表示遗憾；希望得到讲座的有关资料。根据所给提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，内容齐全，句子衔接紧密，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。because an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day. Because引导原因状语从句；for he is not familiar with this city.句中for是并列连词，表示原因；As you know,I'm deeply interested in the British literature,as引导非限制性定语从句；I wonder if I could borrow the record or have a copy of the courseware.if引导宾语从句；learn what's covered in your lecture.what引导的宾语从句很是经典。