Question

第三部分写作（共两节，满分30分）

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For an example, when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is,a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance,on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with house?work. Mum with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

第三部分第一节

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share things with other people. For ^ example,when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He

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said he  is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if

was made something he did made people angrily. For instance,on a cold night he played strong

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and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning.  But he is difference now.  He often

loud different helps Grandma with housework, Mum with cooking and his classmates with their les?sons.