Question

12．某英语报社以"如何与人交流"为主题，面向中学生举行一次征文活动．请根据以下提示，用英语与一篇应征短文：
1．与人交流的好处；
2．你喜欢的交流对象和方式；
3．你对与人交流的建议．（至少两点）
注意：1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称．
It's very important to communicate with people becausecommunication with others will help us out of trouble，make friends and have a better understanding of each other，overcoming negative feelings．
Generally speaking，I'll do small talk face to face with my close friends about my personal matters．Besides，I often chat about my study and life with my parents．While away from home，I'll telephone them at least once a week．Sometimes I'd prefer to email my teachers asking about academic problems．Regular communication has had good effect on my social activities．
However，we should attend to key factors in communication．We should adopt different ways depending on the cultural background．On the other hand，when we meet people occupied in different jobs，we should choose certain topics．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以"如何与人交流"为主题的应征短文．根据题目题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态为主．内容包括：一与人交流的好处；二自己喜欢的交流对象和方式；三对与人交流的建议．
高分句型：
1．It's very important to communicate with people because communication with others will help us out of trouble，make friends and have a better understanding of each other，overcoming negative feelings．句子里It做形式主语，代指动词不定式 to communicate with people；because引导原因状语从句；have a better understanding of 表示"更好的理解"；overcoming negative feelings是现在分词做必然的结果状语．
和别人交流是很重要的，因为和其他人交流会有助于我们摆脱麻烦，交到朋友，更好的理解对方，因此能克服负面的感受．
2．Regular communication has had good effect on my social activities．句子里had good effect on 是固定短语，表示"对某事有好的影响"．
经常交流已经对我的社会活动产生了好的影响．

解答 It's very important to communicate with people because communication with others will help us out of trouble，make friends and have a better understanding of each other，overcoming negative feelings．【高分句型一】（与人交流的好处）
        Generally speaking，I'll do small talk face to face with my close friends about my personal matters．Besides，I often chat about my study and life with my parents．While away from home，I'll telephone them at least once a week．Sometimes I'd prefer to email my teachers asking about academic problems．Regular communication has had good effect on my social activities．【高分句型二】（自己喜欢的交流对象和方式）
      However，we should attend to key factors in communication．We should adopt different ways depending on the cultural background．On the other hand，when we meet people occupied in different jobs，we should choose certain topics．（对与人交流的建议）

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