Question

18．最近，某英语交流学习论坛提出一个话题：Should square dancing be forbidden？并邀请网友参与讨论．你打算参加，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿．
内容包括：
1．广场舞的现状；
2．表明你的观点；
3．给出理由．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于广场舞话题的发言稿．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一广场舞的现状；二自己的观点和理由．
高分句型：
1．However，the loud noise disturbs the people who live around the square．句子里 disturbs 表示"打扰"；who 优点定语从句live around the square，代指先行词the people．
可是，巨大的噪音会打扰到住在广场周围的人．
2．So I suggest the time when people dance on the square should be limited．句子里the time when people dance on the square should be limited是I suggest 的宾语从句，其中the time 是主语，when people dance on the square 是主语的定语从句．
因此我建议人们在广场上跳舞的时间应该被限制．

解答 Should square dancing be forbidden
     In recent years，square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in cities．Many people have a habit of dancing to music with others．However，the loud noise disturbs the people who live around the square．【高分句型一】Should square dancing be forbidden？（广场舞的现状）
    I don't think so．Here are the reasons．First of all，dancing is a good way to take exercise，which can help people to build themselves up．It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other．Besides，the square is a good place for people to work out．At the same time，the people living near the square have the right to live in peace．So I suggest the time when people dance on the square should be limited．【高分句型二】（自己的观点和理由）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写完作文以后，要通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求．最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误．