Question

1．5月8日是母亲节，某英文报社组织题为"What I will do to honor my mother"的征文活动，你有意参加．请用英语写一篇短文，包括以下要点：
1．你打算做什么；
2．为什么要那么做．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，阐述自己在母亲节这一天打算做的事及原因．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．你打算做什么； 2．为什么要那么做．
重要短语：fall on（降临在），help sb with sth（帮助某人做某事），want to do（想要某人做某事） buy sth for sb（给某人买某物），a bit difficult（有一点困难），take good care of（照顾好），day and night（日日夜夜），under one's pillow （在枕头下面）．
【高分句型一】
1．I want to say to my mother that I love her very much．
此处是连接词"that"引导的宾语从句，主句为"I want to say to my mother"．
【高分句型二】
2．However，as a boy，it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart．
此处是由形式主语"it"引导的主语从句，结构为"It+be+形容词+for sb to do sth"． 
【高分句型三】
3．I wish my mother had a wonderful mother's day．
此处是由"I wish+句子"引导的宾语从句，从句中用虚拟语气，结构为"I wish+一般过去时的句子"，表示对现在情况的虚拟．

解答 Mother's Day falls on May 8th．Today is Mother's Day．I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework while others are going to buy some flowers for their mothers．I want to say to my mother that I love her very much．【高分句型一】However，as a boy，it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart．【高分句型二】I think only girls can do that．（打算做什么）
My mother is very kind．She takes good care of me day and night．She spends little money，but buys anything for me that I need．This time I must show my love and appreciation．I am going to give her a card and write like this，"I love you，Mother!"I am going to put it under her pillow．I wish my mother had a wonderful mother's day．（为什么要那么做）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．