题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请你根据以下信息提示,介绍一款时尚手机。
1. 作为高科技产品;这款手机在国内外被广泛地使用。
2. 主要功能:通话、发短信、上网、照相、玩游戏等。
3. 体积小,重量轻易携带,适用于各年龄段人群。
注意:词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Being a product of high technology,____________________________ ____________
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【答案】
Being a product of high technology, the mobile phones are being more and more widely used. They are perhaps the most popular means of communication all over the world today. They are small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient services for communication.
The users can use them for calling, sending short messages and Internet-surfing. Besides, they can be used to take photos and when you are free, you can also enjoy exciting games. So this mobile phone is suitable for people of all ages.
In all, it is the best product of the year.
【解析】
试题分析:请你根据以下信息提示,介绍一款时尚手机。1.作为高科技产品;这款手机在国内外被广泛地使用。2.主要功能:通话、发短信、上网、照相、玩游戏等。3.体积小,重量轻易携带,适用于各年龄段人群。
写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【亮点说明】Being a product of high technology, the mobile phones are being more and more widely used.现在分词作状语,句中并运用现在进行时态的被动语态; They are small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient services for communication. 现在分词作结果状语;Besides, they can be used to take photos and when you are free, you can also enjoy exciting games.时间状语从句和含情态动词的被动语态完美结合;另外,Besides, In all,的使用为文章增色添彩。