题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid in toilet, because he did not want to pay. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, "There's a bum(流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver." The message was passing from person to person. But anywhere along the way, it changed. The bus driver was told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came to, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. This soon caused a 15-miles-long traffic jam. Under the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb!
【答案】
【1】in → in the
【2】her → him
【3】say → said
【4】passing → passed
【5】anywhere → somewhere
【6】immediate → immediately
【7】去掉 to
【8】or → and
【9】miles → mile
【10】Under → with
【解析】
【1】in → in the 此处表示双方都知道的厕所，特指，故在in后面加the 。
【2】her → him 根据上文“a man”，故her → him。
【3】say → said 前后是并列关系，所以此处用一般过去时态，故say → said。
【4】passing → passed 句意：信息被传递。此处用一般过去时态的被动语态，故passing → passed。
【5】anywhere → somewhere 句意：沿着这种方式传递下去，信息的某些地方改变了。故把anywhere → somewhere。
【6】immediate → immediately 句意：他立刻停下车并给公安局打电话。副词修饰动词，故把immediate → immediately。
【7】去掉 to 句意：当警察来的时候。To是多余的，故去掉 to。
【8】or → and 句意：他们告诉乘客下车并停留在远处。此处表示递进的并列关系，故把or → and。
【9】miles → mile 此处是一个符合形容词，名词用单数形式，故把miles → mile。
【10】Under →With 固定词组：with the help of在----的帮助下，故把Under → With。
【知识归纳】
以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.
possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly
immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively
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