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1.假如你是李华,收到你的美国笔友Bob发来询问你厦门共享单车(shared-bike)的现状的一封邮件.你给他写一封回信,介绍共享单车并分享你的看法,回信包含以下要点:
1.共享单车的好处(至少两点)2.共享单车的乱象(至少两种)3.你对共享单车的看法
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅.
3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Bob,
How's everything going?In your la st letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in Xiamen.I'm writing to tell you something about it and share some of my ideas with you.
Undoubtedly,the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of benefits.To begin with,riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving,especially when your destination is not far away.(高分句型一)What's more,the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution.
However,there is also some disturbing news connected with it.Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere,making the city roads messy and dangerous.(高分句型二)Worse still,some shared-bikes have been damaged,stolen or even burnt.
As far as I'm concerned,as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules,I'm definitely in favor of such a program.(高分句型三)I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
LiHua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你是李华,收到你的美国笔友Bob发来询问你厦门共享单车(shared-bike)的现状的一封邮件.你给他写一封回信,介绍共享单车并分享你的看法,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:共享单车的好处(两点);共享单车的乱象(两种);你对共享单车的看法 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点. 
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:Undoubtedly毋庸置疑;To begin with首先;What's more而且;makes contribution to 有助于;However然而;Worse still更糟的是;As far as I'm concerned以我的观点来看;as long as只要; 
To begin with,riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving,especially when your destination is not far away.(高分句型一) 
Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere,making the city roads messy and dangerous.(高分句型二) 
 As far as I'm concerned,as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules,I'm definitely in favor of such a program.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Bob,
      How's everything going?In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in Xiamen.I'm writing to tell you something about it and share some of my ideas with you. 
      Undoubtedly,the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of benefits.To begin with,riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving,especially when your destination is not far away.(高分句型一)What's more,the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution. 
      However,there is also some disturbing news connected with it.Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere,making the city roads messy and dangerous.(高分句型二)Worse still,some shared-bikes have been damaged,stolen or even burnt. 
       As far as I'm concerned,as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules,I'm definitely in favor of such a program.(高分句型三)I'm looking forward to hearing from you. 
                                                                                                                                                  Yours,
                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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