题目内容
8.假如你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼.请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:*帮他分析原因
*给他提出建议
*陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意:词数120词左右
Dear Li Ming,
Best regards,
Zhang Hua.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
It seems that you feel uncomfortable now since you've just entered a new environemnt,and you need time to get used to it,and I'm willing to help you.你看起来不太舒服,既然你已经进入了一个新的环境,你需要时间去适应它,我愿意帮助你.
高分句型二:
To analyze the reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time.And maybe you're a little shy to communicate with others.
来分析下你为什么感到不安,可能你还需要一些时间的原因,也许你和别人交流有点害羞.
解答 Dear Li Ming,
My name is Zhang Hua,I'm one of your classmates.I'm writing you this letter to tell you something about the new environment you're in.
It seems that you feel uncomfortable now since you've just entered a new environemnt,and you need time to get used to it,and I'm willing to help you(高分句型一).To analyze the reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time.And maybe you're a little shy to communicate with others(高分句型二).I think that you can talk with people around you,and be brave to ask them questions that you don't know.I'm sure that this will help,and you will get used to this new place soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua
点评 主题引入自然流畅,能让学生迅速进入情境,找到感觉.要点明确,段落清晰;与学生生活贴近,有话可说,有话能说.限定大方向的同时,给学生比较充足的联想和自由发挥的空间.注意文章应包含以下要点:
1.分析不能融入班集体的原因.
2.提出你认为合理的对他有帮助的建议.
3.陈述你帮助他的具体的打算和计划,表明你的决心,给他增加自信.
Kurt Muller and his wife Rita have spent eleven years making (43)C for the homeless of Berlin,Germany's capital.They first (44)A one long hot summer when most Germans were (45)D on holiday.Kurt and his wife stayed at home,made sandwiches,(46)B a table in the street and gave food to the homeless.
The Mullers soon realized that food and clothing weren't (47)A."What these people also need is warmth and (48)D"says Rita.The Mullers didn't (49)A to give their phone number to the street people and told them to phone anytime.Rita (50)C there was somebody at home to answer the phone and their home was always (51)A to anyone who couldn't face another night on the street.
The couple were soon (52)D all their time and money,so Kurt visited food and clothing companies to (53)B donations.Today,over thirty companies (54)C donate food and other goods to the cause and volunteers help to (55)C them to the homeless.The public also give clothes and money and a shoe producer (56)A new shoes.
Kurt and Rita receive no (57)B for their hard work."We feel like parents"says Rita,"and parents shouldn't (58)D money for helping their children.The love we get on the streets is our salary."Though Rita admits she often gets (59)C,she says she will continue with her work because she likes the feeling of having made a (60)B in the world.
41.A.result | B.truth | C.reason | D.idea |
42.A.traditional | B.developing | C.typical | D.wealthy |
43.A.preparations | B.houses | C.meals | D.suggestions |
44.A.began | B.met | C.called | D.left |
45.A.asleep | B.alone | C.across | D.away |
46.A.brought up | B.set up | C.put aside | D.gave away |
47.A.enough | B.necessary | C.helpful | D.expensive |
48.A.fame | B.freedom | C.courage | D.caring |
49.A.hesitate | B.agree | C.pretend | D.intend |
50.A.make sense | B.found out | C.make sure | D.worked out |
51.A.open | B.crowded | C.noisy | D.near |
52.A.costing | B.wasting | C.taking | D.spending |
53.A.pay for | B.ask for | C.look into | D.carry out |
54.A.completely | B.calmly | C.regularly | D.roughly |
55.A.advertise | B.sell | C.deliver | D.lend |
56.A.donates | B.produces | C.designs | D.collects |
57.A.permission | B.payment | C.direction | D.support |
58.A.borrow | B.raise | C.save | D.expect |
59.A.surprised | B.excited | C.tired | D.amused |
60.A.profit | B.difference | C.decision | D.rule. |