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8.假如你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼.请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
*帮他分析原因
*给他提出建议
*陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意:词数120词左右
Dear Li Ming,
                                             
  Best regards,
                                                           Zhang Hua.

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
It seems that you feel uncomfortable now since you've just entered a new environemnt,and you need time to get used to it,and I'm willing to help you.你看起来不太舒服,既然你已经进入了一个新的环境,你需要时间去适应它,我愿意帮助你.
高分句型二:
To analyze the reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time.And maybe you're a little shy to communicate with others.
来分析下你为什么感到不安,可能你还需要一些时间的原因,也许你和别人交流有点害羞.

解答 Dear Li Ming,
    My name is Zhang Hua,I'm one of your classmates.I'm writing you this letter to tell you something about the new environment you're in.
    It seems that you feel uncomfortable now since you've just entered a new environemnt,and you need time to get used to it,and I'm willing to help you(高分句型一).To analyze the reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time.And maybe you're a little shy to communicate with others(高分句型二).I think that you can talk with people around you,and be brave to ask them questions that you don't know.I'm sure that this will help,and you will get used to this new place soon.
    Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua

点评 主题引入自然流畅,能让学生迅速进入情境,找到感觉.要点明确,段落清晰;与学生生活贴近,有话可说,有话能说.限定大方向的同时,给学生比较充足的联想和自由发挥的空间.注意文章应包含以下要点:
1.分析不能融入班集体的原因. 
2.提出你认为合理的对他有帮助的建议. 
3.陈述你帮助他的具体的打算和计划,表明你的决心,给他增加自信.

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25.We can know from the first paragraphB
A.Lang Lang could play the piano at 2
B.Tom the cat got Lang Lang interested in piano
C.Tom,the cat was Lang Lang's favourite cartoon character
D.Lang Lang learned the piano from Tom,the cat
26.When did Lang Lang perform his first public recital?B
A.In 1989     B.In 1987     C.In 1999      D.In 1990
27.Why did Lang Lang and his father come to Beijing?D
A.To hold more concerts          B.To perform on the global stage
C.To find a good job             D.To realize his dream
28.What happened to Lang Lang when he was in Beijing?C
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24.How does the author organize Paragraph 2?B
A.By giving different exmaples.
B.By making a comparison.
C.By explaining the rules.
D.By arguing directly.
25.We can learn from Paragraph 2 thatD.
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B.people should avoid big waves in life.
C.bigger waves will not leave us in a low.
D.the real life is always full of ups and downs.
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B.Avoid any downs in life.
C.Live a quiet and peaceful life.
D.Try the best to achieve more in life.
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A.A Happy life.
B.Waves in life.
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3.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.按以下要求进行修改:
1)增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词;
2)删词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
3)修改:在错的词下画一条横线,并在该横线下面写出修改后的词.
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1.(36)D
Home can be a great place for children to study.It's important to provide a workspace of their own where they can read books or just write a letter to their friends.
●Location (位置)
(37)FKitchen and dining room are not so well suited for regular study,since books and pens get in the way of the day-to-day uses of those areas.Set up a place where a child can settle in and leave papers and pens at hand without having to clear everything away each night.For a child that likes being alone,set aside a corner of his bedroom,but keep it separate from things like games,music and other hobbies not related to studying.
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●(39)E
Encourage the whole family to help build a supportive environment that children need for success in school.Give them a good example of how to deal with problems,how to manage time and get things done in the right way.(40)G Study will be more enjoyable and effective when supported by the whole family.

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F.Setting up a space in a common area of your home can be a good idea for children.
G.A child who learns to organize his space will carry organization into every corner of his life.

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