Question

5．寒假即将来临．你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法．内容包括：优点、缺点、呆在家中花费少、不能亲身了解外界；、外出旅游增长知识、开阔眼界 花费多、旅途不便．
注意：
词数100字左右．
短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述．
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于假期计划的议论文．根据题目要求可知用一般现在时态和第一人称．内容包括：一点明主题；二呆在家中和外出旅游的优缺点；三自己的观点．
高分句型：
1．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．句子里prefer to 表示"更喜欢"；since引导原因状语从句．
但是，其他人更喜欢外出旅游，因为这能增加他们的知识，拓宽他们的视野．
2．In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．句子里for 引导原因状语从句，表示"因为"； what I like是宾语从句，what 做从句的宾语．
依我看来，待在家里更好，因为我能做我喜欢的事，例如，读书，看电视，帮助父母做家务．

解答 The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what  to do during the holiday．（点明主题）．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．（呆在家中和外出旅游的优缺点）In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．【高分句型二】（自己的观点）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．