题目内容
20.网络购物已日渐成为人们的主流购物方式之一,网购的优点就是方便,省时和省钱,但也给人们的生活产生了一些不利影响,以下是对某大学的大学生网购情况的调查数据,请根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须1.分析图表数据;
2.就如何避免不利影响提出建议(至少两条)
注意:1.词数150左右;
2.开头已经为你写好,不计入总词数.
With the development of Internet,more and more people tend to shop on the Internet.Online shopping has provided some benefits for us,but it also has some disadvantage at the same time.
A recent survey shows that
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分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息 网络购物已日渐成为人们的主流购物方式之一,网购的优点就是方便,省时和省钱,但也给人们的生活产生了一些不利影响,以下是对某大学的大学生网购情况的调查数据,请根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:分析图表数据;就如何避免不利影响提出建议(至少两条)2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:are dependent on依赖;As a result结果是;For one thing一方面;For another另一方面; All in all总之;
高分句型:
1.As a result,it has a bad influence on their study and does harm to their health physically and mentally.
句子里has a bad influence on和does harm to属于固定搭配
2.For one thing,your package can't always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons.
For one thing和后文的For another相并列,表示"一方面…另一方面"; due to 表示"由于".
一方面,由于各种未预料的原因,你的包裹不能按时被收到.
解答 With the development of Internet,more and more people tend to shop on the Internet.Online shopping has provided some benefits for us,but it also has some disadvantage at the same time.
A recent survey shows that more than one third college students are dependent on online shopping and nearly one third spend too much money on it.As a result,it has a bad influence on their study and does harm to their health physically and mentally.【高分句型一】I'm writing to share my views about online shopping.(点题)
For one thing,your package can't always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons.【高分句型二】For another,you can't try on the clothes to see if they fit you or not like you do when shopping in a real shop.(网上购物的缺点)
All in all,I hold that college students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality.(大学生对网购应该持什么样的态度)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.