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19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出增加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
Christie was one of my best friend at high school.At that time,we often spend time study together.Thank to her help,I made a great progress in my study.Last year,she decided to study abroad.In another words,we would be separated for long time.Before she left,I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.She said it was the best gift she has ever had.From then on,we've kept in touch with each other through e-mails.I look forward to see her again in the near future.

分析 本文讲述的是和朋友离别的事.克莱斯顿是我高中的同学,那时我们常常在一起,在她的帮助下我我学习取得了进步.去年她决定去国外学习,在她离开以前,我给她准备了礼物,她说那是她收到的最好的礼物.我们一直保持联系,希望在不久以后能再见到她.

解答 Christie was one of my best friend at high school.At that time,we often spend time study together.Thank to her help,I made a great progress in my study.Last year,she decided to study abroad.In another words,we would be separated for∧long time.Before she left,I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.She said it was the best gift she has ever had.From then on,we've kept in touch with each other through e-mails.I look forward to see her again in the near future.
解析:
1.friend→friends.考查名词复数.由one of 修饰用名词复数 friends.
2.spend→spent.考查谓语动词的时态.根据上文和时间状语 At that time可知谓语动词用一般过去式spent.
3.study-studying.考查非谓语动词.spend time doing表示"花费时间做某事",所以用studying.
4.Thank→Thanks.考查固定短语.固定短语Thanks to  表示"幸亏,由于".
5.去掉 a.考查冠词. progress 是不可数名词,所以去掉 a. 
6.another-other.考查代词.固定短语In other words表示"换句话说".
7.for后加a.考查冠词.固定短语for a long time表示"很长时间".
8.him→her.考查代词.和she 呼应用her. 
9.has→had.考查谓语动词.根据主句She said it was the best gift 可知定语从句she has ever had的谓语动词用过去完成时,所以用had.
10.see→seeing.考查非谓语动词.look forward to 里的to 是介词,所以用doing做宾语,因此用seeing.

点评 考查短文改错.
有些短语里的to 是介词,用doing做宾语.例如:
1.be equal to doing sth 等于做某事,能胜任做某事 
2.be used to doing sth 习惯于做某事 
3.be opposed to doing sth 反对做某事 
4.be reduced to doing sth 使某人沦为做某事 
5.be devoted to doing sth 把时间(钱、精力等)献给做某事 
6.be limited to doing sth 把…限制在做某事的范围内 
7.get down to doing sth 开始做某事,认真处理某事 
8.look forward to doing sth 盼望做某事 
9.what do you say to doing sth 你认为做某事如何?

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