题目内容
19.假如你是郑州某中学的学生李华,你的英国朋友Jason非常喜欢中国的传统文化,作为交换生要来你校学习一年汉语,请用英语给他写一封电子邮件告知他将可能面临的困难或问题以及如何帮他克服困难,适应生活.注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数.
Dear Jason,
I am really pleased that you will be coming to our school to study Chinese.I think you'll face some difficulties in your study because Chinese is not easy to learn.(高分句型一)You'll also suffer from homesickness because of living far away from your country,but there is no need to feel worried.(高分句型二)
Our classmates are very friendly and easygoing,so it'll be easy for you to get used to the life here.I'll introduce you to my family and friends,and you won't feel lonely,I'm sure.Besides,it'll help you to learn Chinese and Chinese culture.
In a word,I'll try my best to make you feel at home,and I'm looking forward to meeting you.(高分句型三)
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文,根据提示信息假如你是郑州某中学的学生李华,你的英国朋友Jason非常喜欢中国的传统文化,作为交换生要来你校学习一年汉语,请用英语给他写一封电子邮件告知他将可能面临的困难或问题以及如何帮他克服困难,适应生活.,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,2、要在合理的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:suffer from 遭受;because of由于;far away from远离;get used to习惯于;Besides另外; In a word总之,一句话;look forward to盼望;
I think you'll face some difficulties in your study because Chinese is not easy to learn.(高分句型一)
You'll also suffer from homesickness because of living far away from your country,but there is no need to feel worried.(高分句型二)
In a word,I'll try my best to make you feel at home,and I'm looking forward to meeting you.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Jason,
I am really pleased that you will be coming to our school to study Chinese.I think you'll face some difficulties in your study because Chinese is not easy to learn.(高分句型一)You'll also suffer from homesickness because of living far away from your country,but there is no need to feel worried.(高分句型二)
Our classmates are very friendly and easygoing,so it'll be easy for you to get used to the life here.I'll introduce you to my family and friends,and you won't feel lonely,I'm sure.Besides,it'll help you to learn Chinese and Chinese culture.
In a word,I'll try my best to make you feel at home,and I'm looking forward to meeting you.(高分句型三)
Yours truly,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.