Question

【题目】假设你是某高一学生李华，暑假期间你与父母乘飞机去了西藏旅游，美丽的风景和当地居民的热情让你流连忘返。请你给在美国的笔友发一封邮件，叙述你的所见，并发表感想。内容要点如下：

1. 欣赏高原风光 (如高地，雪山等) ；

2. 去当地居民家做客，体验当地风俗，品尝美食；

3. 在导游陪同下参观布达拉宫和西藏博物馆, 购买纪念品，并到离拉萨不远的羊八井温泉沐浴；

注意： 1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)；

2. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

参考词汇：西藏 Tibet; 布达拉宫 Potala Palace;拉萨 Lhasa；

温泉 hot spring； 高地 highland;沐浴 bathe (vi)

Dear Betty,

During the summer holiday,_________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________ Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Betty,

During the summer holiday, I went on a tour of Tibet, known as “the roof of the world” with my parents by plane. During my trip I was deeply impressed by the breathtaking scenery—the fantastic highlands, the fresh air, and the snow mountain. In the company of the guide, we paid a visit to the grand Potala and Tibet Museum to learn about its history and culture, where we bought brilliant souvenirs. After that, we went to relax ourselves by bathing in the hot springs in Yangbajing near Lhasa. Besides, we had an opportunity to come to the Tibetan families to experience the local life and unique customs, and tasted a variety of delicious food .

What fun it is to travel there! I hope you can see it yourself.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求暑假期间李华与父母乘飞机去了西藏旅游，美丽的风景和当地居民的热情让他流连忘返。请给在美国的笔友发一封邮件，叙述他的所见，并发表感想。要点包括：1.欣赏高原风光 (如高地，雪山等) ；2.去当地居民家做客，体验当地风俗，品尝美食；3.在导游陪同下参观布达拉宫和西藏博物馆, 购买纪念品，并到离拉萨不远的羊八井温泉沐浴；故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句where we bought brilliant souvenirs.不定式to experience ,过去分词known as “the roof of the world”。impress, brilliant souvenirs, opportunity, experience, a variety of等词汇及After that, Besides,等连接词。