Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was not good in math in the first year of junior high schoo1．Having been failed so many times in math exams，I was anxious about the subject．Every time I tried hardly to work out a math problem，I was afraid of making mistakes，that really made me feel helpless．Luckily，I met a nice math teacher in second year. She told me that I didn’t need to worry about making mistakes because I could find out my shortcomings through my mistake．She always encouraged myself to try again whenever I make a mistake．Thanks to my teacher’s encouragement，I became interesting in math and made rapid progress．My experience proves that failure was the mother of success and that we can learn a lot from our mistakes．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in 改为at

【2】去掉been

【3】hardly改为hard

【4】that 改为which

【5】in 后加the

【6】mistake改为mistakes

【7】myself 改为me

【8】make 改为made

【9】interesting 改为interested

【10】was改为is

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题

【1】in 改为at; be good at 擅长……，题意：我并不擅长数学，故改为at

【2】去掉been; 主语是我，我在数学考试中失利是主动的，不是被动的，故去掉been

【3】hardly改为hard; hardly 几乎不； hard 努力地；既可以当形容词也可以当副词，题意：我努力地学习数学，故改为hard

【4】that 改为which;非限制性定语从句which可以指代前面整个句子，这里就是指代前面I was afraid of making mistakes这句话的，故改为which

【5】in 后加the; the second 表示“第二”，故后加the

【6】mistake改为mistakes; mistake是可数名词，前文用到的都是mistakes，故改为mistakes

【7】myself 改为me; 这里是在谓语动词的后面做宾语所以要用宾格，故改为me

【8】make 改为made；make mistake 犯错，错误只有犯过才需要重新改正，所以要用一般过去时,故改为made

【9】interesting 改为interested;interesting 有趣的（多修饰物）；interested感到有趣的（多修饰人），故改为interested

【10】was改为is; failure is the mother of success失败是成功之母，这句话是真理所以要用一般现在时，故改为is