Question

【题目】本学期你校将对本校职业技能类选修课程进行调研，评选出学生心目中“我最喜爱的选修课(My favorite elective course)”。假如你是李越，推荐园艺(gardening)和防身术(self-defense)两门课。请你用英语给评委会写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两门课程，并分别说明推荐理由。

注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sirs/Madams,

I’m writing here to recommend

Hopefully you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely

Li Yue

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sirs/Madams，

I am writing here to recommend Gardening & Self-defense as my favorite elective courses.

It goes without any doubt that Gardening is among the most popular courses with us students, not only for the lecturer’s unique way of organizing his classes but also for the great pleasure we gain from the hands-on classes. By the way, we’ve learned a lot about plants and gardening. Some of us even feel like majoring in gardening at university.

Self-defense is another course that enjoys great popularity. In a world full of attacks and threats, it’s useful and essential for us students, girls in particular, to learn how to protect ourselves in time of danger. Besides, students can take the opportunity to build up their strength. As far as I know, many more students intend to enroll for the course next term.

Hopefully, you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇书信类作文，假如你是李越，推荐园艺(gardening)和防身术(self-defense)两门课。请你用英语给评委会写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两门课程，并分别说明推荐理由。

注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

亮点说明：本文用了三段式的结构，直接点明主题，写出自己写信的意图，并且说出自己的建议非常真挚，不虚假。用了很多副词来让文章看起来条理清晰，结构明确。用了一般现在时，定语从句等语法知识，让文章色彩增加。