Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是中学生李华，你校外教Mary女士近期准备回英国度假，为此，你班同学准备开一个晚会为她送行。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封e-mail，通知她相关情况。

1. 对她的辛勤教学工作表示感谢。

2. 晚会本周日晚上7：30开始，预计持续1个小时。

3. 地点：高三10班教室

4. 活动：同学们一起唱英文歌，班长代表全班赠送她鲜花和亲手制作的礼物。

注意：

1. 词数100左右。

2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mary,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!

Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we’ve decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you. The party will start at 7:30 on Sunday evening in the classroom of Class 10, Grade III and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope that you can come to join us singing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.

We wish you a plain journey back home! We are also expecting you to come back to China again soon.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇信件类的文章，是讲述通知外教来参加送行party的一封通知信件。文章段落清晰，内容紧扣题目要点。整篇文章分成总分总的形式来展现。第一段，主要总起了这封信的目的，表示对外教的工作表示感谢。第二段是对party的细节为外教展示。第三段，表达希望外教来参加party的愿望，总结了全文。行文段落都很有格式，并且每一个要点的表述都是围绕着对外教表达的感激与不舍之情展开的。

【亮点点拨】

文章的结构性很强，全文来看以总-分-总的结构紧紧地将全文扣住。并且在“分”的条件下，分成了要点通过先后顺序依次讲述了几个点，用Firstly、SoAt the end of the party，这些来进行串联，清晰明了不松散。同时文中还运用到了不少佳句美词。如：At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves，which引导的主语从句的运用，同时这里的词组At the end of the party，也是值得我们加以学习并且运用到实际中去掉；All of the class hope that you can come to join us singing some English songs and have a good time together，这是that引导的宾语从句的运用。每篇文章中都需要一定的句型的运用来扣住评委老师的眼球，而往往这哦都会被同学们所忽视。