题目内容
【题目】假如你是某中学校刊记者,上周一你班举行了一次题为“如何学好英语”的班会。同学们积极讨论并提出了一些好的学习方法。请你根据下面表格所提供的信息表述同学们的观点,并提出你学习英语的建议(至少两条)
注意:
1. 开头已给出。
2. 词数不少于60。
在校内积极参与课堂活动
认真完成作业
在校外看美剧
看英文小说
我的建议1)…
2)…
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Last Monday, we held a heated discussion about how to learn English well.
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【答案】
Last Monday we held a heated discussion about how to learn English well. Many of us put forward some good suggestions. At school ,for example, some of my classmates thought it was important to take an active part in the classroom activities and carefully do the homework.. For after school activities, some classmates recommended watching American TV show to improve our listening and speaking skills. Others agreed that reading English novels was also a good way to practice English.
I think all the suggestions are helpful. As for me, I prefer listening attentively to the teacher in class and form a habit of collecting useful words and expressions. What’s more, writing to my pen-pal in America helps me improve my English a lot.
I hope everyone can find their own ways to learn English well.
【解析】
试题分析:完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有知识要点;写出了文中需要的观点,同时也写出了自己的几点建议,具备较强的语言运用能力;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;完全达到了预期的写作目的,运用了过去时态和较多复合句,使文章流畅。
【亮点】文章用了三段式的结构,条理清晰,很符合题意,词数也正好在要求的区间内。写出了在校内校外学生们学习英语的方法,也写出了自己的建议,用了prefer....to,what’s more等固定搭配,使文章更加有文采,更加流畅。