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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共 有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Sailor Gutzler was only survivor in a plane crash that killed her family in Eddyville，Kentucky in January 3，2015．It was reported that the 7-year-old girl has walked about a mile through the cold，dark wood，wearing a short-sleeve shirt，shorts and no shoes in the freezing wind．Bleeding and frightened，she was walking alone while she saw a light in the distance，it led her to Larry Wilkins'home．She was knocked on the door．Wilkins，71，answered to find a thin，black-haired  girl weeping and trembling．Eventual，with the assistance of the old man，she called the police for help．However，the brave girl helped the investigators locate the crashing plane in the right direction．

分析 文章大意：本文主要讲了一位从飞机失事中幸存下来的人Sailor Gutzler如何被救的事情．当时，这个小女孩独自一人穿过又冷又黑暗的森林，她注意到远处有灯光，于是过去敲门，71岁的Wilkins帮助了这位小女孩，同时小女孩帮助调查人员定位飞机失事的方向．

解答 Sailor Gutzler was∧only survivor in a plane crash that killed her family in Eddyville，
                   the
Kentucky in January 3，2015．It was reported that the 7-year-old girl has walked about
         on                                                           had
 a mile through the cold，dark wood，wearing a short-sleeve shirt，shorts and no shoes in the
                                woods
 freezing wind． Bleeding and frightened，she was walking alone while she saw a light 
                                                                 when
in the distance，it led her to Larry Wilkins'home． She was knocked on the door．Wilkins，71，
                 which                                   去掉
answered to find a thin，black-haired  girl weeping and trembling．Eventual，with the 
                                                                     Eventually
assistance of the old man，she called the police for help． However，the brave girl helped 
                                                             Therefore
the investigators locate the crashing plane in the right direction．
                              crashed
                             
1．考查冠词．句意：Sailor Gutzler是空难中唯一的生还者．此处"唯一的生还者"表示特指，故only survivor前应用定冠词the．
2．考查介词．在具体的某一天应用介词on．
3．考查时态．句意：据报道，这个7岁的小女孩穿着短袖衫、短裤、光着脚在寒冷的、黑暗的树林里走了大约一英里．walk动作发生在被报道（was reported）之前，故应用过去完成时（had+过去分词）．
4．考查名词单复数．wood木头，woods森林．根据句意可知，小女孩是在森林里行走，故应用woods．
5．考查连词．句意：流着血并且很恐惧，女孩正在独自走着，这时她看见远处的灯光．while在…期间；when在某个时间点，正在这时突然，形成"sb．be doing sth．when…"句型，该句型表示"某人正在做某事，这时突然…"．故用when．
6．考查定语从句．"____ led her to Larry Wilkins'home．"为非限制性定语从句，修饰light，从句缺主语，指物，故应用which．
7．考查语态．句意：她敲门．主语she和knock为主动关系，故应去掉was．
8．考查副词．句意：最终，在老人的协助下，她打电话向警察求助．副词位于句首作状语．
9．考查副词．前句"…she called the police for help"和后句"the brave girl helped the investigators…"之前为因果关系，故应用Therefore．
10．考查非谓语动词．crash和plane之间为被动、完成关系，故应用过去分词形式crashed作定语．

点评 做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

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