题目内容
【题目】据我校大部分教师反映,近些年来,随着网络的普及,越来越多的学生的书写能力明显退步了。为了改变这种局面,保护传统民族文化——汉字,我校学生会提出以下倡议:
1.减少课外上网时间,多读书;
2.养成每天记日记的好习惯,练习书写;
3.少发电子邮件,尽量动手给亲朋好友写书信。
请你根据以上内容,代表学生会写一封英文倡议书。
注意:1、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 2、词数:100左右。
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Let’s take action now!
【答案】Dear friends,
In recent years, many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity. As a result, we don’t write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions:
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. We’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails.
As the saying goes, “The style is the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future.
Let’s take action now!
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出,考生在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:
1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。
2.要点要齐全,但不要对要点简单的罗列;要适当地运用一些连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然。
3.注意语气;本文是一篇倡导书,内容多为建议,注意句子格式。
【范文亮点】
1. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions: In order to 目的状语
2.文章中引用名言“As the saying goes, “The style is the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students.”来强调说明汉字书写对学生和所有人们的重要性,具有极强的建议性,使文章内容更充实。
3.文章中运用了“as a result结果”“as well as 并且,和”“in order to为了…”“pay attention to集中注意力于…”等高分词组。