Question

【题目】假设你是李津, 最近在你班的班会上进行了一次有关是否有必要在国外读大学的讨论会, 请根据以下提示写一篇英文短文为校报投稿.

内容要点：1. 优势：学校注重培养团队合作、环境优雅等

2. 不足：费用高等

3.个人看法

注意：1.内容应包括以上所有要点；开头和结尾已经写出,不计入总词数；

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯，字数100；

Dear Editor of the school newspaper,

I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine.

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Yours,

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor of the school newspaper,

I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine. Our class has held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for us to go abroad for college education. The advantages and disadvantages are as follows.

On the one hand, studying abroad is a good choice. Not only is the environment there nice, but also the teaching equipment is advanced. What's more, there are many chances to practice. However, on the other hand, the expense of studying abroad is rather high. Besides, students who study abroad may suffer from homesickness.

As far as I am concerned, although studying abroad will make a difference to our life, culture difference is a big problem. Therefore, if we want to study abroad, we should make good preparations for it.

What are mentioned above are my own opinions about it. I would appreciate it if you could publish this article. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Jin.

【解析】 书面表达的解题思路：

1.确定文章的体裁，本题所要求写的书面表达是书信，那么首先就需要知晓书信的写作特点。

2.确定文章时态的基调，确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。本题是有关是否有必要在国外读大学的讨论会，应该用一般现在时。

3. 给文章划分基本段落，仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有：1. 优势：学校注重培养团队合作、环境优雅等；2. 不足：费用高等；3.个人看法。确定文章的基本段落分为第一段引起话题，第二段论述优势，第三段论述不足，最后一段陈述个人看法。这样确定为四段。

4.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。如文中“Our class has held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for us to go abroad for college education.”。

5.连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。比如文中使用了一些固定搭配及连词：not only …but also，as far as I am concerned，what's more，besides，therefore等。

长难句辨析：

Our class has held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for us to go abroad for college education.

句意：我们的班级热烈讨论是否有必要到国外去接受大学教育。

句中whether引导宾语从句，在从句中包含固定句型“it is +形容词+for+sb.+to do sth.”。

I would appreciate it if you could publish this article.是固定句型，并且在书面表达中经常使用，表示“如果你能发表这篇文章，我会很感激的。”