题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,计划本周末和同学一起去河边植树。请给外教 Nancy 写一份邮件,邀请她一同前往。内容包括:
1.集合时间及地点;
2.活动安排及提醒;
3.午餐及返程时间。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Nancy,
My classmates and I intend to plant trees by the river this weekend. I am writing to invite you to go with us together.
According to our schedule, we will leaver from our school at 8 o’clock in the morning and return at around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. Considering that it is not far from our school, we decided to walk there. So you’d better wear a pair of comfortable shoes and bring some drinking water. By the way, we’ve already prepared enough tools, so there is no need for you to bring some./It would be better if you could bring some necessary tools.
After that, we want to have a picnic to relax ourselves. I really hope you can join us if it is convenient for you.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】本文考查书信类作文。随着时代的发展,电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。假设你是李华,计划本周末和同学一起去河边植树。请给外教 Nancy 写一份邮件,邀请她一同前往。考生首先仔细阅读有关提示,弄清提供的所有信息,判断文章的人称和时态,应该用第一人称,时态用一般现在时。其次要明确要点:1.集合时间及地点;2.活动安排及提醒;3.午餐及返程时间。注意要在提纲的范围内进行分析,构思和想象,不要遗漏要点,要依据提示情景和语句,按照一定的逻辑来写,使用适当的过渡词增强文章的流畅性。最后注意要多使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【范文亮点】所给范文语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子:Considering that it is not far from our school, we decided to walk there.使用了固定词组Considering that…;…so there is no need for you to bring some.使用了there be no need句型;It would be better if you could bring some necessary tools使用了it作形式主语,if引导主语从句;I really hope you can join us if it is convenient for you.使用了状语从句。总之,是一篇优秀的范文。