Question

【题目】假定你是李华，某一国际大型运动会将在你居住的城市举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：

1．个人情况：年龄、性别、学历；

2．个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况；

3．承诺：提供最佳服务。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Games.

I’m a boy of seventeen years old from a high school in Beijing，(1)where the Games will start．My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. And，I have other virtues：fond of sports，familiar with Beijing，good at communication and always glad to help others．So，I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.

Please allow me to be a volunteer for the Games，sir.(3)I promise I will do my best to provide the best service for the Games．Thank you.

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出；写作时不要逐句翻译，要适当添加细节以使行文连贯；根据题目应该选择第一人称讲述，时态用一般现在时；要多使用高级词汇和高级句型提升文章档次。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇申请信，语言简练，层次分明，布局合理，句中使用高级句子。I’m a boy of seventeen years old from a high school in Beijing，(1)where the Games will start．Where引导的定语从句用在句中；I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.句中使用宾语从句；Please allow me to be a volunteer for the Games，sir.祈使句的运用恰到好处；另外，And，fond of sports，familiar with Beijing，good at的使用为文章增色添彩。