题目内容
10．假如你叫李华，以前在乡下一所中学读书，现在是某市一所重点中学的学生．最近有同学对你说其他同学讨厌你．因此，你向某报编辑（editor）写信倾诉你的苦恼．你的具体表现如下：
1．学习努力，尽量与同学友好相处．2．不讲究吃穿．
3．上课认真听讲，积极发言，不耻下问．
4．与人为善，从不伤害别人．
注意：1．字数：100词左右；可以适当增加细节；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Editor，
I'm now studying in a very good school in a city…
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
When I left my old school in the country，I wasvery happy to come here，but now I don't think my choice was right
在乡下时，我离开了我的老同学，我很高兴来到这里，但现在我不认为我的选择是正确的．
高分句型二：
Hearing that，I was sad and couldn'tconcentrate on my studies any more．
听到这个消息，我很难过，无法集中精力学习．
解答 Dear Editor，
I'm now studying in a very good school in a city．When I left my old school in the country，I wasvery happy to come here，but now I don't think my choice was right（高分句型一）．
I do my best to study hard．I listen attentively in class，speak out my opinions and ask my teachers whenever I have questions．I don't care about food and clothes．I try to be friendly to my fellow students and I don't believe I've done anything to hurt them．But one of my friends has told methat some of my classmates hate me and others don't like me．Hearing that，I was sad and couldn'tconcentrate on my studies any more（高分句型二）．
What should I do？I'm looking forward to your advice．
Yours，
Li Hua
点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．
