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3.假如你可以设计一款你心中理想的机器人,请用英语作如下描还:
1.描述其外观,为其命名;
2.介绍其功能和特点;
3.陈述你的设计理由.
注意:1词数100左右;
     2.可以适当增加细节,以使行本连贯.
参考同汇:机器人android.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息你校英语俱乐部最近正在举办主题为"你最想要的机器人"的征文活动.请根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿,描述你最想要的机器人,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:机器人的外观;机器人的功能;你想要这种机器人的原因. 
 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点. 
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:Nowadays当今,现在; First首先;Therefore因此;as well as也,和;be busy doing忙于做某事; 
 First,the robot I want should have a lovely appearance,which will make me happy to see it.(高分句型一) 
Therefore,besides accompanying me when I am walking or playing,it could also help my mother do some housework.(高分句型二) 
My mother is always busy taking care of us,as well as working in a company.(高分句型三)

解答 Nowadays,there are more and more robots in the world.So,what is the robot I want most?Let me tell you. 
      First,the robot I want should have a lovely appearance,which will make me happy to see it.(高分句型一) I like dogs very much,so a robot dog would be best.Though it would look like a dog,it could also stand,like people.Therefore,besides accompanying me when I am walking or playing,it could also help my mother do some housework.(高分句型二)My mother is always busy taking care of us,as well as working in a company.(高分句型三)I really want to help her,but I always have my own work to do.She wouldn't be so tired if she had my robot as a helper. 
      I really hope that such a robot will be available soon.

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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