Question

13．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom 最近感觉学习压力很大，难以应对．他来信问你有没有类似的情况．请根据以下要点给Tom写封回信．
1．告诉他你在学习生活中也会有压力；
2．谈谈你对压力的看法；
3．就如何减压提出你自己的建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
I have received your letter asking me whether I have some stress in my study．As a senior high school student facing the college entrance examination，I surely have some stress．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，a proper amount of stress is beneficial to us．（高分句型二）It can inspire us to work harder and be more creative．However，too much stress can make us break down．Therefore，we should do something to reduce the stress．For example，we can listen to music to help us relax．Besides，we can play some interesting games with our friends．（高分句型三）I hope my advice will be helpful to you．
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom 最近感觉学习压力很大，难以应对．他来信问你有没有类似的情况．请根据以下要点给Tom写封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：告诉他你在学习生活中也会有压力；谈谈你对压力的看法；就如何减压提出你自己的建议   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：college entrance examination高考；In my opinion以我的观点来看；be beneficial to 对…有益；However然而；Therefore因此；Besides另外；be helpful to 对…有帮助；
As a senior high school student facing the college entrance examination，I surely have some stress．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，a proper amount of stress is beneficial to us．（高分句型二）
Besides，we can play some interesting games with our friends．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I have received your letter asking me whether I have some stress in my study．As a senior high school student facing the college entrance examination，I surely have some stress．（高分句型一）
       In my opinion，a proper amount of stress is beneficial to us．（高分句型二）It can inspire us to work harder and be more creative．However，too much stress can make us break down．Therefore，we should do something to reduce the stress．For example，we can listen to music to help us relax．Besides，we can play some interesting games with our friends．（高分句型三）I hope my advice will be helpful to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．