题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天进行网络课程学习,对此很感兴趣。请给他写封邮件回复,内容包括:
1. 网络课程的内容;
2. 对网络课程的感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in my taking online courses during my winter holiday, I'm writing to tell you something about it.
During the winter holiday, my school offered us a wide range of online courses, including Chinese, maths, English and other courses we usually take at school. Every day, I attended lectures according to the time schedule. The best part was that I could replay them if I didn't understand! Meanwhile, there existed some disadvantages. For example, I couldn't communicate with my teachers face to face, and sometimes the Internet got stuck, which would influence my study.
In short, I really appreciate the online courses, which enriched my life in the holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天进行网络课程学习,对此很感兴趣。请给他写封邮件回复,内容包括:1. 网络课程的内容;2. 对网络课程的感受。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):be interested in (感兴趣);winter holiday (寒假);a wide range of (许多各种不同的);attended lectures (听课);according to (根据)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。