Question

【题目】假定英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A charity sale was successfully held on our school playground. In order to organize successfully, we had made the full preparations. When the day finally came, the playground were crowded with people, interested in the things on sale. There were variously used books and magazines, ranged from classic literature works to popular science books, as well as second-hand goods in good condition. The notebook copy from excellent students were the most popular. Not only students but also teachers come to offer us support. Some helped selling goods, and others even sang songs to promote the sale! By the end of the activity, to everyone's surprise, we had raised 5000 yuan in total! All the money collected will go to the students on need to help with their studies. It's such a rewarding activity which students all look forward to the next charity sale.

Answer 1

【答案】1. organize 后面加it

2．删除made后的the

3. were → was

4. variously → various

5. ranged → ranging

6. copy → copies

7. come → came

8. selling → sell

9. on → in

10. which → that

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要叙述了作者学校举行的一次慈善义卖活动的情况。

1. 考查代词。句意：为了可以成功举办它，我们进行了充分准备。结合句意和句子结构可知，organize后应接it作宾语，指代上文提到的a charity sale，故在organize 后面加it。

2. 考查冠词。此处考查短语make full preparations“充分准备“，该短语中没有冠词，故删除made后的the。

3. 考查主谓一致。句子主语playground是第三人称单数，故谓语动词也应该用单数形式，故将were改为was。

4. 考查形容词。此处应用形容词修饰名词books and magazines，故将variously改为various。

5. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处是非谓语动词作状语，range和逻辑主语books and magazines之间是主动关系，故用现在分词作状语，故将ranged改为ranging。

6. 考查名词的数。根据students和were判断主语是复数形式，故将copy改为copies。

7. 考查时态。本篇讲述过去的事情，故应用一般过去时，故将come改为came。

8. 考查短语。此处考查短语help (to) do sth.“帮助做某事”，故将selling改为sell。

9. 考查介词。此处考查短语in need“有需要的”，该短语一般作为后置定语，the students in need“有需要的学生”，故将on改为in。

10. 考查连词。此处考查结果状语从句such…that…“如此……以至于……”，故将which改为that。