题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的朋友Smith是一位独自在国际部学习的英国交换生,正在准备汉语的HSK考试,感到压力很大,想得到你的建议。请按以下内容要点给他回信。
要点:1. 如何应对压力
2. 如何准备汉语考试
3. 给他鼓励和安慰
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
I’m glad to have heard from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I'm glad to have heard from you. Knowing that you are under great pressure recently, I'm writing the letter to give you some suggestions, which I hope will be helpful to you.
With an importance exam approaching myself, I can relate to your feeling. I believe working out a study plan helps to motivate you to work efficiently and thus increase your confidence. Additionally, it's a good idea to do some physical exercise to build up your body and relieve your pressure.
According to my experience, to prepare for an exam is to review your lessons step by step. It's advisable to refer to your notes and consult your Chinese teacher if necessary.
With your hard work and strong will, I'm convinced that you'll pass the exam and cheer up again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给Smith写信,给他关于如何准备HSK考试的建议。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 如何应对压力
2. 如何准备汉语考试
3. 给他鼓励和安慰
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
offer sb sth./ under pressure/ deal with/ help sb. do sth./ make preparations for/ step by step/ pass the test/ fail to do sth./refer to/take notes
第三步:连词成句
Knowing that you are under great pressure recently, I'm writing to give you some suggestions, which I hope will be helpful to you.
I can understand your feeling, because I also have an important exam to take.
Working out a study plan helps to motivate you to work efficiently and thus increase your confidence.
It's a good idea to do some physical exercise to build up your body and relieve your pressure.
According to my experience, to prepare for an exam is to review your lessons step by step.
It's advised that you should refer to your notes and consult your Chinese teacher when necessary.
With your hard work and strong will, I believe that you'll pass the exam and feel relaxed.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)