题目内容
【题目】每年都有许多人外出旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下:
1. 尊重习俗;2. 不高声喧哗;3. 其他
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾语已为你写好,不计入词总数。
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇提纲类作文,要点已给出。成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:一般现在时;3.文章的内容要点要齐全:(1)尊重习俗;(2)不高声喧哗;(3)其他;4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,100单词左右。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。状语从句和非限制性定语从句的混合使用:While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern.形式主语it的使用:it is necessary to watch our manners。倒装句的使用:Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.连接词的使用也是一大亮点:In my opinion, First, Besides, Also, More importantly。