题目内容
【题目】今年寒假后各校都未能如期开学,宅家网上学习(learning at home online) 是大家的共同记忆。假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友David也将开始宅家学习,想 分享你这段经历,请电邮告知,主要内容是:
1.上网课的优点;
2.上网课的弊端;
3.你的感悟。
注意:1.词数100左右。首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, David!
It's sad to know that you'll have to have classes at home.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Hello, David!
It’s sad to know that you’ll have to have classes at home.
Owing to the outbreak of the disease, we had to have online courses at home instead of attending school after the winter holiday. Actually it is not that bad. Online courses break through the limitation of time and space, providing us with great convenience to study. But it also has some disadvantages, one of which is its bad effects on our eyesight.
All in all, very coin has two sides, and the key is to use it properly. As far as I am concerned, if you can make full use of every possible means appropriately to study, it won’t matter whether you study online or in the classroom.
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封电子邮件:今年寒假后各校都未能如期开学,宅家网上学习(learning at home online) 是大家的共同记忆。假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友David也将开始宅家学习,想 分享你这段经历,请电邮告知,主要内容是:1.上网课的优点;
2.上网课的弊端;3.你的感悟。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; outbreak(爆发),online courses(在线课程),limitation(限制),convenience(便利), effect(影响),appropriately(恰当地)及eyesight(视力)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。