题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank来信询问你的寒假生活情况。请根据以下要点给他回信:
1. 由于冠状病毒病爆发,假期被迫延长;
2. 寒假生活(在线上课、读书、锻炼身体等);
3. 期盼开学。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头已为你写好。
参考词汇:冠状病毒病COVID-19
Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank,
With grateful thanks, I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation for all you care and concern.
The winter vacation was extended because of the outbreak of coronavirus. As for us students, thanks to the online communication apps, we interact with our teacher through live-streaming classes, but the prolonged screen time takes a heavy toll on my eyes, so I’ve come up with creative indoors relaxions such as reading and taking exercise to keep up my health.
I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. At the same time, I am looking forward to going to school early.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank来信询问你的寒假生活情况。请根据以下要点给他回信:1. 由于冠状病毒病爆发,假期被迫延长;2. 寒假生活(在线上课、读书、锻炼身体等);3. 期盼开学。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):extend my sincere appreciation (表达诚挚的感谢);because of (因为);as for (至于);thanks to (由于);interact with (相互沟通)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。