Question

6．假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动．现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下：
1．简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动：
2．谈谈你们开展该活动的收获．
注意：
1．词数不少于120个；
2．不能使用真实姓名和．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据文章所给提示信息写一篇英语发言稿．写作要点：1．简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动，2．谈谈你们开展该活动的收获，属提纲作文．时态应该以一般过去时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．重要短语：set up（建立，搭建），conduct a variety of activities（组织很多活动），take an active part in （积极参加），act as （充当，作为），win the first place（赢得第一名），not only…，but also…（不但…，而且…），benefit sb （对…有益）．

解答 Today I'll talk about our English club．Our English club was set up two months ago．Now we have members of 25．We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon．So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students．【高分句型】Last week，we held an English story-telling competition．We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes．Every member took an active part in the activity．Two foreign teachers were invited to act as judges．At last Li Bing won the first place．（描述俱乐部一项与英语有关的主要活动）Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways．Not only did it improve their spoken English，but also it brought them much fun．【高分句型】They hope many such activities can be held．（开展活动的收获）
   That's all．Thank you．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．