Question

【题目】书面表达：

最近你发现我们学校很多学生的饮食存在很严重的问题，他们不吃早餐或其他正餐，而是选择一些垃圾食品。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

1. 阐述问题；

2. 分析原因（学生喜欢吃垃圾食品、餐厅饭菜种类少等);

3. 提出两个以上解决办法。注意词数120左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：餐厅 canteen

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently many students in our school aren’t having breakfast or eating other meals throughout the day. Instead they are choosing to eat some junk food. This is really a problem.

One reason for this problem is that many students love eating junk food, but don’t know what effects it can bring to their health. Another reason is that there are only a few types of food in the canteen for students to choose from.

To solve this problem, first, we can hold lectures or speech contests on healthy eating, which will make students realize the harmfulness of junk food. Second, the canteen should offer a wide variety of food. Last, we’d better call on parents to help their children from good eating habits. I think these ways will help students keep a healthy diet.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放类作文。本文要求考生写一篇英语短文，叙述学校中学生存在的饮食问题。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.阐述问题：很多学生的饮食存在很严重的问题，他们不吃早餐或其他正餐，而是选择一些垃圾食品。2.分析原因：学生喜欢吃垃圾食品、餐厅饭菜种类少等；3.解决方法：举办关于健康饮食的讲座，让学生意识到垃圾食品的危害。同时要求父母亲协助孩子养成良好的饮食习惯。建议文章分为三部分，各要点自成一段。同时使用考生熟悉的句式和结构，让文章更加流畅自然。