Question

15．你喜欢快餐食品吗？快餐食品在青少年和儿童中很流行．请根据提示写一篇120 词左右的发言稿，内容要点包括：
快餐流行的原因（至少2点）
弊端（至少2点）
个人看法
开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Fast food
Dear friends，
Nowadays，fast food is becoming more and more popular among children and
 
Teenagers．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一篇发言稿，阐述关于快餐食品的问题．写作要点：1．快餐流行的原因；2．弊端；3．个人看法．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第三人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：…reason for sth （…的原因），in no time（立即…），take sth away（带走某物），cost sb much money （花费某人很多钱），as little as possible（尽可能少地），in a hurry （快点）．

解答 Fast food
Dear friends，
Nowadays，fast food is becoming more and more popular among children and teenagers．I think there are several reasons for its popularity．
First，it's very convenient and can save a lot of time．You can go into a fast restaurant to order your food and it is ready in no time．Besides，you can take it away or eat there．What's more，it offers excellent service and tasty food．（快餐流行的原因）
However，fast food is not good for people's health，especially children．There is too much fat in the food and you can't get enough fresh vegetables．Also the food is very expensive，which may cost you much money．【高分句型】（弊端）
We are what we eat．Therefore，it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits and eat fast food as little as possible．【高分句型】It's only a choice when you are really in a hurry．（个人看法）
That's all．Thank you!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．