题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你叫李华,你的美国笔友Mike写信询问你进入高中后的生活和学习情况,请按以下内容要点给Mike写一封回信:
1. 刚进入高中时感觉很孤独,现在和同学们相处得很好;
2. 每两周回家一次,非常想念父母及家人;
3. 目前在英语学习上遇到了一些困难,恳请Mike给予英语学习的建议和帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It has been 4 months since I went to the senior high school. __________
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It has been 4 months since I went to the senior high sc hool. At first, I felt very lonely and didn’t like to communicate with others. But my teachers and classmates all cared about me and gave me a lot of help. I am getting along well with them now. We can only go back home once every 2 weeks. So I miss my family very much.
As to my study, I don’t have much trouble with most of my subjects except English. I can’t understand what my teacher says most of the time as she always gives us lessons in English. My spoken English is also poor and I can’t communicate with my classmates in English in and after class. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice on how to learn English well.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇回信类的文章,讲述的是给美国笔友介绍现在高中的生活情况,以及遇到的问题希望的到求助。在写作前,要注意一点,首先看题目,弄清楚题目具体要求是什么。在写作前要对文章的所提供的细节类的要点信息进行了解,有助于在写作前进行的段落大纲的罗列,最后在进行书写上,不仅要符合书信类的作文的格式要求,在句型和语法的运用上也要做到仔细。避免文章,杂乱无章。本文的调理十分清晰。首段是问候,中间部分是按照题干所给的要点进行描述,最后就是针对自己的问题希望朋友早日回信的一个结尾句。全文情节紧扣,并且没有偏题,值得我们学习。