Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，并在其下而写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。

Last Friday, we were having our class while our teacher Miss Li suddenly slipped and fall to the ground. All the students were concern about her. Helped by some students, I carried her on back to the clinic immediately. Her left leg was turned out to be broken and she had to stay in hospital for half a month. The following day, we paid a visit for her with flower and fruits. See her leg wrapped in bandages, all of us felt sorry for her, hoping she would recover soon. Unexpectedly, only five days late, Miss Li returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were deep moved, all rising to applaud her.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】while指一段时间，when 既指时间点，也可指一段时间，摔倒时瞬时的，是时间点。故将while改为when。

通读全文可知，本文的时态是过去时，所用谓语动词要用过去式。故将fall改为fell。

句意：所有的学都生被她关心。本句是被动语态，be动词+动词过去式表示被动。故将concern改为concerned。

根据句子可知本句中back是特指我的back，所以用my表示我的，或者用the特指我的。故添加my/the。

本句不是被动语态，句子中有两个谓语动词，去掉turned句子意思不完整。故去掉was。

pay a visit to是固定搭配，意为参观，访问。故将for改为to。

Some修饰可数名词复数。故将flower改为flowers。

动词位于句首要变成动名词形式。故将see改为seeing。

Late是指晚的，later指稍晚一些，later一般和时间搭配。故将late改为later。

深是用来形容moved的，moved是动词，副词形容动词。故将deep改为deeply。