Question

13．近年来，人类对大自然的破坏引发了各种自然灾害．假如你叫李华，请你写一封倡议书．
主要内容：自然中的灾害及造成的影响；拯救措施．
要求：
1．词数100左右；文章开头已给，不计词数；
2．短文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息．
In recent years there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities，such as．floods，earthquakes and sand storms．
These natural disasters do great harm to humans．Many people don't have enough food or water．They even lost their lives and became homeless．Besides，the climate of the world becomes worse and worse．
It is time for us t o take action to protect our planet．We must stop cutting down trees and hunting animals．We have to save water and use paper on both s ides．We must try our best to save energy，or we will have nowhere to live．
Most importantly，measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment．Only a small action is meaningful to our planet，so come on and join us!A．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
We must try our best to save energy，or we will have nowhere to live
我们必须尽力节约能源，否则我们将无处可住．
高分句型二：
Most importantly，measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment．Only a small action is meaningful to our planet，so come on and join us．
最重要的是，政府也应该采取措施防止人们破坏环境，只有一个小小的行动对我们的星球是有意义的，来吧，加入我们！

解答 In recent years there have been many natural disaster s caused by human activities，such as，floods，earthquakes and sand storms．
       These natural disasters do great harm to humans．Many people don't have enough food or water．They even lost their lives and became homeless．Besides，the climate of the world becomes worse and worse．
       It is time for us t o take action to protect our planet．We must stop cutting down trees and hunting animals．We have to save water and use paper on both s ides．We must try our best to save energy，or we will have nowhere to live（高分句型一）．
       Most importantly，measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment．Only a small action is meaningful to our planet，so come on and join us!（高分句型二）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．