题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是一名高中学生李华,你的英国朋友Tom今年将要到中国来上高中. 请你给他写一封邮件,就如何在中国过好高中生活从以下两个方面提出建议。
1. 学习方面; 2. 课余生活方面,
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头为你拟好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September in China. __________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September in China. As a high school student, I have so much experience to share with you.
In China, High School life is full of challenges. We have a lot of homework to do every day, so making good use of your time will be of great benefit to your studies. It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class. Besides, high school life can be very colorful as well. I suggest you take part in some meaningful activities after class, such as sports and voluntary work, to develop yourself properly and thoroughly.
The coming three years in China will be the most beautiful time in your life. I believe that with your efforts, you’ll make it colorful and wonderful.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇建议信。是关于Tom的外国朋友要到中国来上大学,Tom对他的一些建议。文章主要根据题目中的两个关键点---“1. 学习方面;2. 课余生活方面”展开。行文条理清晰,行文总共分成三大部分。首段,是总起段落,总领接下来要写的建议内容。中间部分,根据题目所给的要点进行展开阐述,并且也采取了总分的格局,以In China, High School life is full of challenges为总起句,进行分点阐述。尾段,是自己对朋友送出的美好祝愿。目的确,并且扣住题目,值得我们参考。
【亮点点拨】
本文字数控制得当,并且行文不似日记账似得枯燥乏味,节奏感整体包围局部,多采取了总分的形式不论是整篇文章还是一个段落。同时多数美丽的短语引起关注,如:take part in,preview your lessons,as well
The coming three years,is full of等等都是较为新颖以及值得我们学习并且加以利用的短语,当然有好词组出现的美文也少不了些许的美句,如:making good use of your time will be of great benefit to your studies,采取了动名词作主语的形式,省去了以往单纯的陈述句的形式,减少了枯燥乏味感;It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class这是it be句型的使用,也是文章的一个亮点所在;I believe that with your efforts, you’ll make it colorful and wonderful这是that引导的宾语从句的运用,等等,很多都是值得我们进行效仿的。整篇文行文流畅。
【题目】假设你是某中学学生会主席李华。请你根据以下要点给你校外教Daniel发一封邮件,邀请他参加你校的运动会。
时间 | 10月14日——16日 |
地点 | 县体育场 |
学生项目 | 田赛,径赛 (track and field events) |
教师项目 | 4×100米接力赛 |
注意:1词数100词左右
2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3 邮件的开头已给出,但不计入总词数
Dear Daniel,
I am Li Hua, Chair of the Students’ Union for our school.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua