题目内容
【题目】假设你是某中学学生会主席李华。请你根据以下要点给你校外教Daniel发一封邮件,邀请他参加你校的运动会。
时间 | 10月14日——16日 |
地点 | 县体育场 |
学生项目 | 田赛,径赛 (track and field events) |
教师项目 | 4×100米接力赛 |
注意:1词数100词左右
2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3 邮件的开头已给出,但不计入总词数
Dear Daniel,
I am Li Hua, Chair of the Students’ Union for our school.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
I am Li Hua, Chair of the Students’ Union for our school. I am writing to invite you to take part in the school sport meet.
It will be held on October 14th at the stadium of our town and lasts for 3 days. The sports meet will include track and field events for students, such as the relay, the high jump and the long jump. There will also be some games for teachers , such as the 4×100m relay race .
It will be a lot of fun. I am sure you will enjoy it. We are all looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是篇邮件应用文,要求是邀请外教来参加学校的运动会,内容提示较简洁,只是框架,介绍了运动会的内容,但学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,用一般现在时和将来时。根据写作要求文章分三段来写。第一段首先要邀请外教来参加运动会。第二段重点描述运动会的细节。第三段表达自己的期盼之情。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全,表达思路明确,知识点运用恰当到位,文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如:take part in参加,the relay接力赛,the high jump跳高,the long jump跳远,are all looking forward to期盼....,I am Li Hua, Chair of the Students’ Union for our school.使用了同位语,There will also be some games for teachers , such as the 4×100m relay race .运用了there be句型。