Question

【题目】2015年7月31日，北京申办2022年冬奥会成功。假定你是美国人Peter,请给你中国的笔友李华写一封电子邮件，祝贺北京申冬奥会成功。要点如下：

1.表示祝贺；

2.届时有意来做志愿者；

3.预祝冬奥会圆满成功。

注 意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的格式已给出。

参考词汇：冬奥运Olympic Winter Games

Dear Li Hua,

Yours,

Peter

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I’m writing to congratulate that Beijing will be the host of 2022 Olympic Winter Games, which was announced on July 31, 2015.

As we all know, the Olympic Games are the most important sport event in the world. So it is an honor to host such a big event. People around the world will gather together in Beijing, which will improve culture exchange as well as economic development. During the games, I’d like to be a volunteer to help people around since I know both English and Chinese as well.

Congratulate again and wish the Olympic Winter Games in Beijing a great success!

Yours,

Peter

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲作文。本文要求以美国人Peter的身份给你中国的笔友李华写一封电子邮件，祝贺北京申冬奥会成功。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.得知中国申奥成功，表示祝贺；2.届时有意来做志愿者；3.预祝冬奥会圆满成功。要点较为简单，写作时可以在第二点中添加适当内容，让文章更流畅自然。适当使用复合从句，增加文章的丰富性。不要一直使用陈述句，适当使用祈使句和疑问词等，提高获得高分的可能性。