Question

4．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
    增加：在缺词处一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother．He has been died for a year．When I was a teenager，he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn．We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning，stayed in local restaurant for breakfast，and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations．Just after dawn，he would find the right spot in the woods．He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement．Though I never hunted an animal successfully，but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience．

Answer 1

分析 在这个短文中作者讲述了少年时期Marion舅舅教他捕猎的经历，尽管作者没能成功地捕获到一个猎物，但他却从这个宝贵的经历中学到了耐心和勇敢．

解答 Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother．He has been died for a year．When I was a teenager，he taught us how to hunt in the New
                                                                     brothers                    dead                                                                   me                            
Jersey woods used the hours before dawn．We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning，stayed in∧local restaurant for breakfast，and then
                   using                                                                                                                                 a
travel on to one of his hunting destinations．Just after dawn，he would find the right spot in the woods．He would show me how not to make a sound
traveled                                                            before      
and a movement．Though I never hunted an animal successfully，but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience．
or                                                                                        去掉but                                    patient

1．brother改为brothers；考查名词复数，one of是指其中一个后跟名词复数形式．
2．died改为dead；考查形容词，系动词be后跟形容词表示一种状态．
3．us改为me；考查代词，这里宾格代词应与前面状语从句中的主语I保持一致，所以用me．
4．used改为using；考查动词的分词形式，现在分词表主动，过去分词表被动，这里动词use是由主语主动发出，故用using．
5．in后面加a；考查冠词，句中resturant是可数名词单数形式，所以前面加a．
6．travel改为traveled；考查动词时态，在这个句子中travel和前面的left，stayed并列作谓语，所以时态保持一致，根据语境应当用过去时．
7．after改为before；考查介词，根据上下文语境，应当是在黎明之前就做好捕猎的准备，故用before．
8．and改为or；考查连词，and与or都可以表并列，但and用于肯定句，or用于否定句和疑问句，所以这里用or．
9．去掉but；考查连词，but不能与though连用，前面从句中有though，所以这里要去掉but．
10．patiently改为patient；考查形容词，这里形容词patient和brave并列作系动词be的表语．

点评 短文改错首先要快速阅读短文，掌握短文的基本大意，然后分析句群结构，弄清句子之间的结构关系，再运用所掌握的词汇，短语等基
本知识详细阅读，找出短文中的错误加以改正．